1. It is not appropriate for teachers and that she should have used the right text to send to a teacher.
2. That you can understand it very clearly and you can see what they are trying to say.
3. That the should have included paragraphs and checked there spelling.
4. That they should have used one o on so, not like this sooooooo.
5. That the should have included paragraphs and checked there spelling.
6. She should have used the full word great not like this gr8.
7. That is dose not say who it if from and who it is to and it is very short and they should have written more.
8. That it is very confident and that it is very good and that it is very formal and good for a teacher